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And on the seventh day God said, Let there be Flash...or a least a medium which flash and other various content can be shown. We got both. WOOT for Newgrounds!
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A good message for all the little kids out there however the animation wasn't too good. The only part I really liked was the close ups of the phone...keep trying.
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Your ideas were good. However I, (after watching it a few times) still missed most of the jokes due to voice clarity and actionscript problems. There are heaps of quick and simple ways to correct these problems.
Fix up the actionscript, sound quality and re-submit it...that is my advice to you.
Good Luck.
Emerald-Fox
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Things I liked about this movie:
1) The date changes from the number '2007' to the words 'Ancient Greece'.
2) The marching song.
and of course
3)' order beer and pizza' lol.
Nice movie and good work. Made me laugh.
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I enjoyed it. I mean the song and aniamtion worked well together and it was very upbeat. As this is you first I'd say you did pretty well but next time fix the bugs (eg. music finishes before animation). Little things like that can spoil a movie.
Anyway it's a 6/10 from me. Good luck in future works.
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It was good and I see you have added a bit more from when I last saw it (blue guy). I still think it's funny and the animation is, as always really, really good.
Keep pumping them out Lock-Jaw!
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I liked the song but I felt the movie didn't do it justice. Keep trying thats all I can say.
Author's Response:
Hmm. Well, practice makes perfect, yes?
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My only comments however are:
1) It should have been more snappy (faster cutting etc).
2) You should have done more of the play.
Anyway it was a good summary of the play and it was good work. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Yeh, I probably should have done it with faster cutting from scene to scene, but I did what I did of the play because my main aim was to get the important points across in as quicker time as possible.
Thanks for the review.
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Ah...the never ending paradoxical cylce of time. Ah...the never ending paradoxical cylce of time. Ah...the never ending paradoxical cylce of time. (you get the picture)Animation way not so good but I loved the concept. Loop was very effective. Good work.
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I could barely hear it for one thing and the animation was not to my liking. It also seemed a bit slow (especially seeing as they are get fighters). Fix these things and you might have a good flash.
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They were alright graphics and sound. It was funny and had some pretty good jokes in there. Although I along with many of the other viewers don't know the 'in joke' it was still pretty enjoyable and of coure very random. Good work.
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